Friday, December 7, 2018
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Thursday, November 22, 2018
Thankful
11:09 AM 0 Comments
The year has turned its circle,
The seasons come and go.
The harvest is all gathered in
And chilly north winds blow.
Orchards have shared their treasures,
The fields, their yellow grain.
So open wide the doorway-
Thanksgiving comes again!
The seasons come and go.
The harvest is all gathered in
And chilly north winds blow.
Orchards have shared their treasures,
The fields, their yellow grain.
So open wide the doorway-
Thanksgiving comes again!
I am thankful for my awesome and amazing students...
and their families!
Enjoy your long weekend. See you on Monday!
#gobblegobble
#gobblegobble
Thursday, November 15, 2018
Friday, October 12, 2018
Wrap Up Your Writing!
8:55 AM 0 Comments ELA, final draft, memoir, personal narrative, publishing, writing
TIME TO PUBLISH!
MEMOIRS: Students in 5th grade Language Skills 5: Composition will complete "Unit 2: Writing a Memoir" Monday, October 15.
Use this scoring guide to make sure you have everything you need. Then read your memoir aloud to yourself or a partner to make sure it sounds the way you want it to.
PERSONAL NARRATIVES: Students taking 6th grade "Intermediate Language Skills A: Composition" will complete Unit 2: Personal Narrative on Monday, October 15.
Use this scoring guide to make sure you have everything you need. Then read your memoir aloud to yourself or a partner to make sure it sounds the way you want it to.
All Final Drafts are due on October 19!
All final drafts must be typed, double spaced, and in a 12 point font. Make sure your name is in the top right corner of your paper, and in the file name. Adults can help with typing and formatting.
When you are ready, upload your paper to File Sharing on the OLS. Click here for instructions on how to upload a file to File Sharing.
I can't wait o read your stories!
Wednesday, October 3, 2018
Write Me a Narrative!
1:01 PM 0 Comments ELA, personal narrative, writing
This week we will continue working on our personal narratives.
Now, that you've come up with a topic, start writing!
Include thoughts, feelings, details, description, and dialog.
These things will bring your story to life for the reader!
I love this song about writing a personal narrative.
Turn up your speakers!
The lyrics are typed below, so you can sing along.
Thanks Mr. Laughton!
Write
me a Narrative…
Beginning,
Middle, and a Clear Cut End
Go on
and tell me about…
Where
you’ve been,
Moments
small or big,
or
you can…
Make
up a tale from your imagination!
Kick
it off with a strong lead.
Make
it interesting.
Let
us know who’s in it,
and
the problem they’re facing.
Build
up the action,
and
pace your story right.
Make
a solid sequence,
and
use transitions
that
help your story flow all the way along!
Bring
it to a close with a
LESSON
or
REFLECTION
or
Some
kind of THOUGHT.
T. F.
D. D. D.
Will
make your words a story…
We
want to
Feel
what you feel.
See
what you see.
Make
it as real as it possibly can be.
WE’RE
ALL ALONG FOR THE RIDE
and
we see it through your narrator’s eyes!
Write
me a Narrative…
Beginning,
Middle, and a Clear Cut End
Go
on and tell me about…
Where
you’ve been,
Moments
small or big,
or
you can…
Make
up a tale from your imagination!
Make
it your own creation.
IT’S
TIME TO WRITE
BECAUSE
THE WORLD IS WAITING.
After you write your first draft, look back through your
story and circle every "was".
Then, see if you can
make that sentence more descriptive
using the 5 senses!
Instead of telling...
My teacher was angry.
You can show...
Sitting at his desk, his jaw tightened.
His eyes flashed heat waves at me. The words erupted from his mouth, "I
want to talk to you after class." The final hiss in his voice warned me
about his feelings.
Which would you rather read?
Look Who's Talking!
When you write a memoir about an event in your life… the trick is to fashion your memories into an engaging story. One way to do this is to add dialog!
Adding dialog to your memoir will make
it even more interesting!
it even more interesting!
Dialog helps the reader understand character
relationships in the story.
relationships in the story.
Dialog reveals conflicts and causes a reaction.
Dialog increases the story’s pace and
makes it more dynamic.
Here is a dialog between Calvin and Hobbes.
In comics like the one above, artists use speech bubbles to show who is speaking as well as what is being said. In written dialog, the rules are a little trickier.
Here's a movie to explain a little further...
Tuesday, October 2, 2018
Angles Are All About Degrees!
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This week we are learning about ANGLES in our math class!
Angles are fun to name... and measure!
There are a variety of angles...
Here's a catchy tune that includes the angles above
(well, most of them).
QUICK TIP!
If you are measuring an angle and the rays are
too short, use a ruler to extend the lines.
Then it will be easier to see where it lines up with
your protractor scale.
Remember to add your notebook page to your spiral before our next class.
Check your work with my answer key below!
(click on the image to enlarge it)
Check your work with my answer key below!
(click on the image to enlarge it)
So cute!
Monday, October 1, 2018
Grip & Rip!
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Here's a fun way to quickly add notebook pages to your spirals this year!
Saturday, September 29, 2018
October Calendar
9:22 AM 0 Comments
HAPPY OCTOBER!
Here is this month's class calendar.
Please print it and post it in your work area.
Click on the calendar for a printable version.
Wednesday, September 19, 2018
Memoir Memory Map
11:01 AM 0 Comments ELA, memoir, writing
mem·oir [mem-wahr]
noun an account of one's personal life and experiences; an autobiography.
For the next 4 weeks, we are going to work on writing a memoir. You will complete the online lessons in Composition and we will share in Class Connect. Final drafts are not due until October 20.
Your first assignment is to come up with an engaging topic to write about.
Draw a detailed map of your neighborhood.
Label your map:
Important places.
Where something happened.
Where kids gather.
A danger spot you avoid.
A favorite place.
A secret place.
Friend’s and neighbor’s houses.
Where something happened.
Where kids gather.
A danger spot you avoid.
A favorite place.
A secret place.
Friend’s and neighbor’s houses.
As you draw, what memories come
back to you?
Choose 3 memories you might
want to write about.
WARNING: The song below will get stuck in your head for eternity.
Which story do you know the most about?
Which
story contains all 4 of these story elements?
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